Meri zubaan pe hai jo, woh lafz hai tera
Aye khuda meri ghazal ka har harf hai tera.

Saturday, 18 July 2015

Bajrangi Bhaijaan Review

Bajrangi Bhaijaan indeeds best gift by Salman Khan not just either to Indian or Pakistani mundane, but to the entire humanity. Kabir Khan's initial Directorial venture 'Ek Tha Tiger' was absurd but he fortunately came up with good talent in Bajrangi Bhaijaan.

Unlike his conventional roles, Salman came in quite different character this time. Pawan, man with kind heart and innocence running in vein mix-blended with chaste and purity with regard to religion. Not much fighting scenes, not much romantic scenes, no sex no show-offs. Just pure story that flows steadily like sand-in-hand.

Moreover, Nawazuddin's character was just like a sugar in cup of tea, amalgamating the flavour of comedy to the tough journey of Bhaijaan. His support to the film in his comical way gave him the chance to deserve a standing ovation.
Quick and Comic dialogues are worth clappings.

The new comer baby girl actress also did her role very well. She added the essence of cuteness and innocence too to the film.

Pritam's music was clever and simple too. He synchronized his tunes with the story and lyrics by various lyricist are awesome and words flow by holding the hand of story.

Hats Off Salman Khan, Love you....

My Ratings
****1/2
(4.5 Stars)

Review by
Amit Valmiki

Monday, 29 June 2015

The Unknown Familiar Damsel

When and where shall I find,
The girl dwelling in my mind.
Swinging in rain, wearing pink
Now I shall be going to sink.
The water is above the head now
I shall do something but how?
In present circumstances, living the moment of questionnair session.
Where mind has copius questions and heart is futile to answer to them.
Wanting to get dissappear somewhere
With her love, companion and some care.

- Amit Valmiki

Friday, 19 June 2015

O Beloved!

When you left
O beloved!
I renunciated all that I had.
My ego, My pride
My love, My self
I gave up all that belonged to me.
There is nothing in my life,
More valuable than your companionship.
No treasure can make me rich,
My real treasure is your smile
No prostitute can satisfy me,
My actual desire is your love.
My world is not enough,
And is abandoned by your essence
Me, and my introduction;
Is incomplete, without you.
Just wishing your come-back
In temples,
I bowed my head down
In mosques,
I bent on my knees
In churches,
I have spent my 'detached from you' life.....
Longing for you
Yes, living for you
O beloved!
I merged myself into you like a mad.
You are no more,infront of me
Escaped free from the prison of my eye-sight
I am thirsty, for just one glance of you.
Herein; sitting alone in esplanade and dew.
In the dawn,
I see you at mushriq (East)
In the evening,
Across the horizons
I gaze you at maghrib (West)
On the papers,
I keeps searching your name.
In my food,
I wishes to sense your taste.
These days are,
Tumultuous to live
When you left,
O beloved!
I am living alone and sad.
~ Amit Muntazar

Saturday, 7 February 2015

A Fainted-Rose Day

एक रोज़ मुझे भी किसी ने ROSE दिया था,
ROSE में भरके प्यार का DOSE दिया था।

Rose लेते वक़्त चुभा था काँटा मेरे हाथ में,
मैं कुदरत का वो इशारा जान ना सका।
इस ख़ुशी के बाद होगा दर्द का आलम बड़ा,
ख़ुशी में मसरूफ़ में संदेसा जान ना सका।
उलझी हुई पंखुड़ियाँ मुझसे कह रही थी,
प्यार में एक दिन उलझ जाएगा रे तू बन्दे।
और मैं नामाकूल सिर्फ गुलाब की महेक लेता रहा....

पंखुड़ी वैसी ही उलझी रही एक बेनाम सी उलझन में
और महक को ले गयी हवा संग अपने।
क्या बचा Rose में? मुरझा गया वह कुछ ही रोज़ में।
मेरा प्यार भी Rose की तरह ही तो था,
न महक रही न मीठास रही उसमे
बस उलझी हुई एक दास्ताँ रह गयी।

एक रोज़ मुझे भी किसी ने Rose दिया था.......

Written And Owned By
Amit Valmiki

Friday, 6 February 2015

Ab Main Shayari Nahi Likhta

Mujhe jo dard diya tha tumne mujhse judaa ho kar
Use main aksar shayari bana kar bazaar mein bech deta tha.
Dil ka zakhm bhar saa gaya hai aur ab pehle saa woh dard bhi nahi uth taa.
Bas yahi wajah hai...

Ab main shayari nahi likhta
Ab main shayari nahi likhta.

Ab meri tarah meri kalam bhi tanhaa ho gayi hai tumhare dard se juda ho kar.
Yaa yun kahun ke yeh awara ho gyi hai tumhare kisson ko kho kar.
Kamabkht kabhi khushi toh kabhi hasi ko vyakt karti hai,
Laakh koshish karta hun par pehle si woh bebasi likhne ko mana karti hai.
mera is par koi ikhtiyaar na raha
Sach kahun toh mera dil gham ka mazaar na raha.

Shayad isliye
Ab main shayari nahi likhta
Ab main shayari nahi likhta.

Ek dafa zidd kar baitha kuch likhungaa tumhare liye
Sajaunga kaafiya-radeef tumhari yaad ka sahara liye.
Lekin jab diary kholi maine toh ek kora panna has kar mujhse kehta hai.

" Kyun main tum par apne alfaaz fizul karta hun,
Jab tum mere seedhe jazbaat nahi samajh saki toh mere kathin harf kya samjhogi?

"Sahi baat hai"
yeh keh kar main diary band kar deta hun
Aur....

Ab main shayari nahi likhta,
Ab main shayari nahi likhta.

Written And Owned By
Amit Muntazar

Wednesday, 28 January 2015

Team Safar - Anthem

कुछ खानाबदोश और कुछ मस्त-मलंग हैं हम,
हमसे रुस्वा है खुद रुसवाई जो एक संग हैं हम।

ज़माने की बंदिशों से दूर, हम कैफ़ियत में जीते हैं,
बाजार में बिकते नहीं, समझो बस वह रंग हैं हम।

Sunday, 14 December 2014

जब तक यह दिल तेरी याद में जलता रहेगा।

मेरा शायरी का कारखाना यूँ ही चलता रहेगा,
जब तक यह दिल तेरी याद में जलता रहेगा।

यूँही नहीं लिखता मैं अशआर दिल सुकून पता है
दिल यहीं बस इन कोरे सफहों पे पलता रहेगा।

मैं तेरा होने से पहले काश तुझे मेरा बना लेता,
दिल को अब यही मलाल जावेदां खलता रहेगा।

रात कैसे गुज़रती है ये बात न पूछना मुझसे कभी,
तेरे बिन तो मेरा दिन भी उदास ही ढलता रहेगा।

जब तक यह दिल तेरी याद में जलता रहेगा।